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What is analysis in English A?
Explaining how a writer's choices create meaning and affect the reader — not what the text says.
What are the three steps of the analysis move?
Name the CHOICE → explain the EFFECT on the reader → link to MEANING/purpose.
Summary vs analysis?
Summary = what a text says; analysis = how a choice works and why (the so-what).
What is a 'choice' (technique)?
Anything the writer decided — a word, image, sentence shape, layout or structure.
What is 'effect'?
What a choice does to the reader — how it makes them think or feel.
Which step holds most of the marks?
The effect (and the link to meaning) — not naming the technique.
What is feature-spotting?
Naming a device without explaining its effect — it scores almost nothing.
What does asking 'so what?' do?
Pushes you past describing a choice into explaining its meaning — real analysis.
Coverage or depth — which scores better?
Depth: one choice explained fully beats five just named.
Which criterion rewards analysis?
Criterion B — Analysis and evaluation.
Turn 'the writer uses a short sentence' into analysis.
The short sentence feels abrupt and final, making the warning sound urgent (choice → effect → meaning).
What are the four steps of the analysis process?
Read (twice) → TAP (Type, Audience, Purpose) → Hunt (underline choices) → Explain (choice → effect → meaning).
What does TAP stand for?
Type, Audience, Purpose.
Why read the text twice?
First read = the gist; second read = notice detail without missing the point.
What is the memory hook for the process?
Read · TAP · Hunt · Explain.
What does 'Hunt' mean?
Underline the choices that stand out — your evidence.
What is the 'Explain' step?
Turn each choice into a point: choice → effect → meaning.
Which two steps do students most often skip?
TAP, and the effect part of Explain.
Why do TAP early?
It keeps your whole analysis focused on what the text is for.
What is a text's 'purpose'?
Why it was made — to persuade, inform, entertain, warn, and so on.
Should you write as you first read?
No — read for the gist first, or you grab the wrong details and miss the point.
What is context?
The situation a text comes from — who made it, when, where and why.
Why does context matter?
The same words mean different things in different situations — context shapes meaning.
Give an example of context changing meaning.
'This place changed my life' = a sales pitch in a gym advert, but heartfelt in a personal blog.
What is a source line?
The short note giving a text's type, origin and date.
Where do you find context on an unseen text?
The source line you're given, plus clues inside the text.
What is an internal clue?
Something inside the text (a name, place, reference or slang) that hints at time, place or audience.
What is the golden rule of context?
Use only context you are given or can see — never invent it.
Why is invented context dangerous?
It's worse than none — it sends your whole analysis off course.
Should context replace analysis?
No — context sharpens the reading of purpose and audience; it doesn't replace choice → effect → meaning.
What should you read first in a Paper 1 text?
The source line — it's free context about type, origin and date.
What is purpose?
The job a text is trying to do — persuade, inform, instruct, entertain, warn or reflect.
Name three common purposes.
Any of: persuade/sell, inform, instruct, entertain, reflect, warn.
Why name the purpose early?
It gives your analysis a target — read every choice as serving that job.
What's the key question to ask of each choice?
'Why did the writer do this — how does it help the job?'
Can a text have more than one purpose?
Yes — one main purpose, often a secondary one that helps it (e.g. humour to persuade).
What is the main purpose of an advert?
To persuade / sell.
What is the purpose of a recipe or safety notice?
To instruct.
How does knowing purpose help your marks?
Every point ties back to the job, so your analysis is focused (Criterion C) and about effect (Criterion B).
A funny advert: what is its main purpose?
To persuade — the humour is a secondary purpose serving it.
Should you name the purpose, then forget it?
No — link each choice back to the purpose as you go.
What is audience?
The people a text is written for.
Name four clues to the audience.
Vocabulary, references, tone/register, and what the writer assumes you already know.
What does simple vocabulary suggest about audience?
A wide or young audience.
What does jargon suggest about audience?
Experts or fans who already know the terms.
What is register?
How formal or informal the language is.
What does 'linking a choice to the audience' look like?
'This slang suits a teenage audience, making them feel the brand is one of them.'
Why is 'the audience is everyone' weak?
It's too vague — name the specific group so you can explain the choices.
Can a text have two audiences?
Yes — e.g. a children's leaflet that also speaks to parents.
What is 'what's assumed' as an audience clue?
Whatever the writer doesn't explain — they expect the audience to know it already.
Which letter of TAP is audience?
The A — Type, Audience, Purpose.
What is a theme?
The broad topic a text is about — a word or two (e.g. freedom, technology).
What is a message?
The specific point or opinion a text makes about its theme — a full sentence.
What's the quick test to tell theme from message?
One or two words = theme; a sentence with an opinion = message.
Give a theme and a matching message.
Theme: courage. Message: 'Real courage is being scared and acting anyway.'
What question finds the theme?
'What is this mostly about?'
What question finds the message?
'What does the writer want me to think or feel about it?'
How do you check something is a message, not a topic?
See if you could argue with it — a real message can be disagreed with.
Why isn't naming the theme enough for marks?
The credit comes from the message and from showing how choices build it.
Is 'technology' a theme or a message?
A theme — it's a one-word topic.
What builds the message in a text?
The writer's choices — the analysis shows how they create the point.
What is a global issue?
A real-world concern that is significant, transnational and locally felt.
What are the three properties of a global issue?
Significant (wide impact), transnational (crosses borders), locally felt (seen in everyday life).
Name the five fields of inquiry.
Culture/identity/community; Beliefs/values/education; Politics/power/justice; Art/creativity/imagination; Science/technology/environment.
How is a global issue different from a theme?
A theme is a topic (a word); a global issue is a sharp, wide real-world concern.
What does 'transnational' mean here?
Felt across borders — in more than one country or culture.
What does 'locally felt' mean?
You can see it in the specific everyday detail of a real text.
Why must a global issue be narrow?
A broad topic can't be explored in depth; a narrow focus keeps the Oral clear.
Which assessment uses a global issue?
The Individual Oral — you examine one global issue across two works.
Turn 'war' into a good global issue.
e.g. 'how war forces children to grow up too fast' — narrow and specific.
Give the chain from theme to global issue.
Theme (topic) → message (the point) → global issue (a wide real-world concern the message speaks to).
What is diction?
A writer's word choice — the exact words they pick.
What is connotation?
The feelings and ideas a word carries beyond its plain meaning.
What is loaded (emotive) language?
Words chosen to push a strong feeling — ‘slashed’, ‘mob’.
What is a euphemism?
A gentle word used in place of a harsher one — ‘passed away’ for ‘died’.
‘home’ vs ‘house’ — what's the difference?
Same building; ‘home’ carries warmth (connotation), ‘house’ is neutral.
How do you analyse a word choice?
Name the word + the feeling it carries + what it makes the reader think.
Why do writers use euphemisms?
To soften or hide a harsh truth — often to play something down.
A loaded verb for ‘cut’?
‘slashed’ / ‘butchered’ — they add violence.
Denotation vs connotation?
Denotation = the plain dictionary meaning; connotation = the feelings around it.
Commonest word-choice mistake?
Saying ‘descriptive language’ without naming the word or its feeling.
What is register?
How formal or informal a text is — its level of formality.
What signals a formal register?
Full words, no slang, polite and serious phrasing.
What signals an informal register?
Contractions, slang, exclamations, a chatty tone.
Why analyse a register shift?
It's deliberate — it changes the audience or the effect.
Register vs tone?
Register is how formal it is; tone is the writer's attitude.
What does register tell you?
Who the text is for and how it wants to come across.
A signal of informal register?
A contraction (‘you'll’) or slang (‘soz’).
How do you score on register?
Name it + quote a signal + link it to the audience.
Is an exclamation mark formal or informal?
Informal — it adds a chatty, excited feel.
Commonest register mistake?
Saying ‘it's formal’ without a signal or a link to the reader.
What is tone?
The writer's attitude to their subject or reader.
What is mood?
The feeling created in the reader by the text.
What is voice?
The distinctive personality of the writing — how the writer sounds.
Tone vs mood?
Tone is the writer's attitude; mood is the reader's feeling.
Mood vs voice?
Mood is the feeling in you; voice is the writer's overall personality on the page.
How are all three created?
Through word choice, imagery and sentence style.
How should you name a tone?
Precisely — ‘weary, resigned anger’ beats ‘angry’.
What is a tonal shift?
A deliberate move from one attitude to another that carries meaning.
How do you prove tone/mood/voice?
Quote the diction, imagery or syntax that builds it — don't just label it.
Commonest mistake?
Vague labels (‘interesting tone’) with no precise word or evidence.
What is syntax?
The way words and sentences are arranged.
What does a short sentence do?
Hits hard and slows the reader — good for emphasis.
What does a long sentence do?
Builds up detail or momentum — calm or breathless.
What is a sentence fragment?
A deliberately incomplete sentence used for punch (‘Nothing.’).
What does the passive voice do?
Hides who acted — ‘it was decided’.
What does present tense add?
Immediacy — it feels like it's happening now.
Why analyse a list?
A pile-up of items can feel overwhelming, endless or relentless.
How do you analyse structure?
Name the choice + its effect on pace or emphasis.
A dash or colon — is it a choice?
Yes — punctuation controls pause and emphasis, so it's analysable.
Commonest structure mistake?
Labelling ‘short sentence’ with no effect.
What is repetition?
The same word or phrase used again on purpose for emphasis.
What is parallelism?
Repeating the same sentence shape to build a rhythm.
What does repetition do?
Hammers an idea home and makes a line stick.
What does parallelism add?
A steady, powerful rhythm the reader can feel.
‘of the people, by the people, for the people’ — what is it?
Parallelism — the same shape repeated for rhythm.
Why does breaking a pattern matter?
The line that breaks the run stands out and lands hard.
How do you analyse repetition?
Name the repeat + what its beat does to the reader.
Repetition vs parallelism?
Repetition repeats a WORD; parallelism repeats a PATTERN.
Where does a chant get its power?
The repeat lodges the words in your head.
Commonest repetition mistake?
Spotting the repeat but not saying what it does.
What is contrast?
Opposite ideas or words set against each other.
What is juxtaposition?
Placing two things side by side so each sharpens the other.
What does contrast do?
Makes each side look sharper and points to a difference.
Where does the effect of a contrast live?
In the gap between the two sides.
‘best year and the worst’ — what is it?
Contrast — opposite ideas set against each other.
Why place two things side by side?
The nearness makes the gap between them hit harder.
How do you analyse a contrast?
Name both sides + what the gap makes the reader feel.
Contrast vs juxtaposition?
Contrast = opposite ideas; juxtaposition = placing things side by side.
Why does a wedding next to an empty chair work?
The joy sharpens the sense of loss.
Commonest contrast mistake?
Spotting a contrast but not explaining the gap.
What is a rhetorical question?
A question asked for effect, not a real answer.
What is the imperative?
A command — the writer giving the reader an order.
What is direct address?
Speaking straight to ‘you’, the reader.
What is inclusive language?
‘We’, ‘us’, ‘together’ — folding the reader into one group.
What does a rhetorical question do?
Nudges the reader toward an obvious answer, so they agree.
What does an imperative do?
Speaks straight to the reader and stirs them to act.
What does ‘we’ do?
Folds the reader onto the writer's side, sharing a stake.
How do you analyse these devices?
Name the device + how it positions the reader.
Where do you often see all three?
Speeches and adverts — stacked to persuade.
Commonest mistake with these?
Naming the device but not saying what it does to the reader.
What is a metaphor?
A comparison that says one thing *is* another — ‘the classroom was a zoo.’
What is a simile?
A comparison using ‘like’ or ‘as’ — ‘quiet as a held breath.’
How do metaphor and simile differ?
Metaphor says X IS Y; simile says X is LIKE Y — the ‘like’/‘as’ is the giveaway.
How do you spot a simile?
Look for the words ‘like’ or ‘as’ joining two things.
Why does a metaphor hit harder?
It presses the two things together as one, with no ‘like’ to hold them apart.
How do you analyse a comparison?
Name the two things compared + the picture or feeling the link builds.
‘Her eyes were oceans’ — what kind?
A metaphor — it says her eyes ARE oceans, no ‘like’.
‘Brave as a lion’ — what kind?
A simile — the ‘as’ compares the two.
What two things does a comparison link?
The real thing and the image it's compared to.
Commonest comparison mistake?
Naming ‘metaphor’ without saying the two things linked or the effect.
What is personification?
Giving human qualities to a thing, animal or idea — ‘the wind screamed.’
What is pathetic fallacy?
Using weather or nature to mirror a mood — ‘the sky wept as she left.’
How do they differ?
Personification = any human quality on anything; pathetic fallacy = weather/nature matching a mood.
How do you spot personification?
Look for a human action or feeling given to a non-human thing — ‘the fog crept’.
How do you spot pathetic fallacy?
Weather or nature changes to match a character's feelings.
Why do writers use these?
To make the setting carry a feeling and pull the reader into the mood.
‘The trees danced in the wind’ — what?
Personification — dancing is a human action given to trees.
‘Thunder rolled as the villain arrived’ — what?
Pathetic fallacy — the storm mirrors the menace.
How do you analyse them?
Name the human quality or matched mood + the feeling it builds.
Commonest mistake with these?
Naming the technique without the feeling it creates.
What is imagery?
Language that appeals to the senses to make a scene vivid.
Which senses can imagery use?
Sight, sound, touch, smell and taste.
How do you spot a sound image?
Words that make you hear it — ‘the gate shrieked’.
How do you spot a touch image?
Words for how something feels — ‘the cold coin bit her palm’.
What is a colour image?
A sight image using colour — ‘the sky bruised purple’.
Why do writers use imagery?
To put the reader inside a scene and make them feel it, not just read it.
How do you analyse imagery?
Name the sense + quote the image + say what it makes you feel.
Why hit several senses at once?
It makes a scene feel overwhelming and real — worth analysing.
‘The air tasted of rust’ — which sense?
Taste (with a hint of smell) — a body sense image.
Commonest imagery mistake?
Saying ‘vivid imagery’ without naming the sense or the feeling.
What is a symbol?
An object that stands for a bigger idea — a wilting flower for lost innocence.
What is a motif?
An image that keeps coming back across a text, building meaning.
How do symbol and motif differ?
A symbol is what an object means; a motif is an image that recurs.
How do you spot a symbol?
An ordinary object that clearly points to a bigger idea beyond itself.
How do you spot a motif?
The same image or object keeps returning through the text.
Why do writers use symbols?
To carry a theme through an object, without stating it directly.
A caged bird might symbolise…
A lack of freedom, or feeling trapped.
What does a motif add by repeating?
It builds and ties a theme together across the whole text.
How do you analyse a symbol?
Name the object + the bigger idea it stands for + why it fits.
Commonest symbol/motif mistake?
Spotting the object without saying what it means.
What is irony?
When the real meaning is the opposite of the plain words, or an outcome is the reverse of what's expected.
What is a paradox?
A statement that seems to contradict itself but reveals a truth.
Give an example of irony.
A fire station that burns down — the outcome is the reverse of what you'd expect.
Give an example of a paradox.
‘The more you have, the less you feel.’
How do you tell them apart?
Irony = opposite meaning; paradox = one line that contradicts itself but is true.
Why do writers use irony?
To say a second thing under the words — often to criticise without saying it straight.
Why do writers use paradox?
To make you stop, then see a surprising truth.
How do you analyse irony?
Name it, then say the opposite truth the words hide.
What is situational irony?
When the outcome is the reverse of what you'd expect.
Commonest mistake with irony?
Saying ‘this is ironic’ without explaining the opposite meaning.
What is hyperbole?
Deliberate exaggeration, far past the literal truth, for effect.
What is understatement?
Deliberately playing something down so it sounds smaller than it is.
Give an example of hyperbole.
‘I've told you a million times.’
Give an example of understatement.
Calling a deep cut ‘just a scratch’.
How do you tell them apart?
Hyperbole makes something bigger; understatement makes it smaller.
Why do writers use hyperbole?
To make a feeling land hard — stress, awe, frustration.
Why do writers use understatement?
A huge thing made small can hit harder, or sound calm and controlled.
Is hyperbole meant literally?
No — the gap from the truth is the point.
How do you analyse understatement?
Name it, then the gap between the small words and the real size.
Commonest mistake here?
Taking the exaggeration as fact instead of an effect.
What is an allusion?
A passing reference to another text, person or event the reader is expected to recognise.
What is an allegory?
A whole story that stands for a bigger idea, where the parts map onto something real.
Give an example of an allusion.
Calling a hard journey ‘an odyssey’ — a nod to the old Greek voyage.
Give an example of an allegory.
A story about animals taking over a farm that really means a revolution.
How do you tell them apart?
An allusion is a small nod inside the text; an allegory is the whole story standing for something.
Why do writers use allusion?
To borrow a lot of meaning in one word or phrase.
Why do writers use allegory?
To make a big or risky idea easier to see through a simple story.
How do you analyse an allusion?
Name what it refers to and the meaning it brings in.
How do you analyse an allegory?
Name the bigger idea and match parts of the story to it.
Commonest mistake here?
Spotting an allusion but not saying what meaning it borrows.
What is foreshadowing?
A small early hint that quietly warns the reader of what's coming later.
Give an example of foreshadowing.
A mention of ‘the loose stair’ pages before someone falls.
What is a planted detail?
A small object or fact dropped in early that seems minor but matters later.
How can mood foreshadow?
A heavy or dark mood quietly warns the reader that trouble is coming.
How do you analyse foreshadowing?
Name the hint AND the later event it sets up.
Why do writers foreshadow?
To build tension and make a later event feel prepared, not random.
Can a happy line foreshadow bad things?
Yes — ‘nothing could go wrong’ often warns the opposite.
When do you often notice foreshadowing?
At the payoff — you feel it once the later event arrives.
Foreshadowing vs a random detail?
Foreshadowing pays off later; a random detail leads nowhere.
Commonest mistake here?
Calling every early detail foreshadowing without naming its payoff.
What is narrative perspective?
Who tells the story and how much they can see.
What is first-person narration?
A character telling the story using ‘I’.
What is third-person narration?
A narrator outside the story using ‘she / he / they’.
First person — strength and limit?
Close and personal, but only one character's view.
What can third person do?
Follow one person, or know everyone's thoughts.
What is an unreliable narrator?
A teller we can't fully trust — they hide or misread things.
Why analyse the narrator?
The choice controls what the reader is allowed to know.
What is voice in a narrator?
The personality and style of the one telling the story.
How do you score on perspective?
Name it + what it lets us see + what that does.
Commonest perspective mistake?
Naming ‘first person’ with no effect on the reader.
What is characterisation?
How a writer builds a person on the page.
What is dialogue?
The words characters speak to each other.
‘Show, don't tell’ — what does it mean?
Reveal character through action, not a flat label.
How does dialogue reveal character?
What they say and how they say it shows who they are.
What does a character's action show?
Their real nature — often more than any description.
Why watch for a gap between words and actions?
The clash reveals the truth a character hides.
What does clipped, one-word dialogue suggest?
Distance, reluctance or hidden feeling.
How do you analyse characterisation?
Quote a detail + say what it shows about the person.
Direct vs indirect characterisation?
Direct tells us (‘she was kind’); indirect shows it through action.
Commonest characterisation mistake?
Labelling a character without the detail that shows it.
What is structure in a text?
The order things are put in — start, middle, end.
Why does the opening matter?
It hooks the reader and sets up the whole text.
What is a flashback?
A jump back to a scene from before the main action.
What is non-chronological order?
Events told out of time order, on purpose.
What is pacing?
Where a text speeds up or slows down.
What does fast pacing do?
Creates rush, panic or excitement.
What does slow pacing do?
Makes a moment linger and feel weighty.
What is circular structure?
A text that ends where it began, echoing its start.
How do you analyse structure?
Name the order or shape + what it does to the reader.
Commonest structure mistake?
Saying ‘it's a flashback’ without the effect.
What are sound devices?
Ways writers use the sound of words for effect.
What is alliteration?
The same consonant sound repeated in nearby words.
What is consonance?
Repeated consonant sounds within or ending words.
What is assonance?
Repeated vowel sounds inside words — ‘lone road home’.
What can soft sounds (s, w, h) do?
Make a line feel gentle, calm or hushed.
What can hard sounds (k, t, b) do?
Make a line feel harsh, sharp or violent.
What do long vowel sounds do?
Slow a line down — often sad or grand.
What is rhythm?
The beat of a line — steady, bouncy or heavy.
How do you analyse a sound device?
Name it + quote the sound + say what feeling it creates.
Commonest sound-device mistake?
Naming ‘alliteration’ without saying what the sound does.
What does colour do in an image?
It sets the mood before you read any words.
What can red connote?
Danger, urgency or heat — it grabs attention.
What can cold blue connote?
Loneliness, sadness or cold — an isolating mood.
What is composition?
How the frame is arranged — what's centred, foreground vs background, and empty space.
What does a centred subject do?
Grabs your eye first — it's the most important thing.
What does empty space do?
Makes a lone figure look isolated and small.
Foreground vs background?
The foreground is what's up close and noticed first; the background sits behind it.
How do you analyse colour?
Name the colour + the mood or feeling it builds.
How do you analyse composition?
Say what's centred or in empty space + what it makes you look at.
Commonest mistake with images?
Naming a colour or shape with no effect on the reader.
What is layout?
How the space is organised — what goes where in the frame.
What is typography?
The style and size of the fonts used.
What is visual hierarchy?
What your eye sees first, second, third.
What can bold CAPITALS feel like?
Shouting or a serious warning.
What can a hand-drawn font feel like?
Warm and human, like a personal note.
How does size set hierarchy?
The biggest, boldest thing is read first; small print is read last.
A common poster layout?
A big image on top with the words underneath.
How do you analyse typography?
Name the font style + the feeling it gives.
How do you analyse hierarchy?
Say what your eye lands on first + why it's ranked that way.
Commonest mistake here?
Naming a big font or a layout with no effect on the reader.
What does a low camera angle do?
Makes a figure loom and seem powerful.
What does a high camera angle do?
Makes a figure look small and vulnerable.
What is a close-up?
A tight shot that fills the frame — good for emotion.
What does a wide shot do?
Puts a figure in a big space — can feel small or alone.
What is framing?
How close or wide a shot is, and what's kept in or cut out.
What is gaze?
Where the subject looks in the image.
What does a direct gaze do?
Looks straight at you — feels personal, like direct address.
What does looking away do?
Lets you watch the subject unseen — can feel lonely or thoughtful.
How do you analyse angle?
Name the angle (low/high) + what it makes you feel about the subject.
Commonest mistake here?
Naming an angle or a look with no effect on the reader.
What are the three lenses for the ‘so what’?
Meaning (what it signifies), purpose (what the text is for), audience (who it targets).
The core analytical move?
Technique → effect → so what (link to meaning/purpose/audience).
Meaning vs purpose?
Meaning = what the choice signifies; purpose = what the text is trying to do.
What is the ‘audience’ lens?
Linking the effect to who the text targets and how it works on them.
How many lenses must a point use?
At least one — the clearer the link, the higher the mark.
A linking phrase for purpose?
‘which serves the purpose of…’ / ‘furthering its aim to…’.
A linking phrase for audience?
‘which targets…’ / ‘which appeals to…’.
A linking phrase for meaning?
‘which suggests…’ / ‘which implies…’.
The commonest weak analysis?
Feature-spotting — naming a device with no effect and no so-what.
Where did you learn to SPOT purpose and audience?
In 1.1 — here you LINK your techniques to them.
Why show techniques working together?
It builds a stronger point and shows the text as a crafted whole.
A phrase that joins two techniques?
‘Combined with’, ‘reinforced by’, ‘together they…’.
The final move when combining?
Name the ONE, stronger effect the combined choices build.
A single brick vs a wall?
One device = a point; devices together = a wall (a stronger effect).
What do you look for first?
Two choices in the same place (same line/sentence).
Then what?
Their shared effect — what both point towards.
Common mistake?
Listing two techniques in separate sentences without joining them.
Which criterion rewards this most?
Criterion B — analysis and evaluation.
‘which echoes’ is used to…
…link one choice to another that repeats or reinforces its effect.
Best structure for a combined point?
Choice 1 + effect, choice 2 + effect, ‘together they…’ + the single effect.
Better than ‘makes the reader feel sad’?
‘evokes a sense of melancholy / sorrow’.
Better than ‘shows’?
‘conveys’, ‘suggests’, ‘implies’, ‘reveals’.
Critical verb for contrast?
‘juxtaposes’ — places side by side for effect.
Critical verb for working against a tone?
‘undercuts’ — e.g. humour undercuts the serious mood.
Critical verb for stressing something?
‘emphasises’, ‘foregrounds’, ‘underscores’.
Precise or fancy?
Precise — the exact word, never long words just to impress.
Name an exact feeling, not ‘sad’?
‘melancholy’, ‘grief’, ‘longing’, ‘despair’ — whichever fits.
Which criterion rewards this?
Criterion D — language and expression.
‘Interesting’ is a bad word because…
It names no actual effect — say what the effect IS.
A critical verb for ‘hints without saying’?
‘implies’ or ‘suggests’.
What does PEAL stand for?
Point, Evidence, Analysis, Link.
P — Point?
A one-sentence claim about the writer's choice or its effect.
E — Evidence?
A short, embedded quote — a few words.
A — Analysis?
Technique → effect → audience → combined choices (the whole unit).
L — Link?
One sentence tying back to the question or the text's purpose.
Which step gets the most words?
Analysis.
One point per paragraph?
Yes — don't cram several ideas into one.
Common mistake?
A long quote and too little analysis.
Which criterion does PEAL help most?
Criterion C — focus and organisation.
Where does all your analysis go?
Into the ‘A’ (Analysis) step.
Analysis vs evaluation?
Analysis = what the effect is; evaluation = how well it works, and why.
Which criterion demands evaluation?
Criterion B — ‘analysis AND evaluation’.
Words that signal evaluation?
‘effectively’, ‘powerfully’, ‘particularly’, ‘arguably’.
What must follow ‘this is effective’?
WHY — the reason the choice succeeds.
A phrase showing ‘how far’?
‘arguably’, ‘to some extent’, ‘especially for this reader’.
Evaluating by comparison?
Noting one choice is MORE effective than another, and why.
Common mistake?
Saying ‘effective’ and stopping — no reason given.
‘arguably’ is useful because…
It shows nuance — a judgement you can defend, not an overclaim.
The base of evaluation is still…
Technique → effect — you build the judgement on top.
Top-band Criterion B words?
‘insightful’ and ‘evaluative’ — judge, don't just describe.
What makes an analysis ‘weak’?
Feature-spotting — naming a device with no effect.
What is a ‘middling’ analysis?
Technique + effect, but no depth, audience or evaluation.
What makes an analysis ‘top-band’?
Technique → effect → audience → combined → evaluated, in PEAL.
Fastest way to improve?
Compare weak, middling and top-band versions of the same line.
What lifts middling to top?
Adding audience, combining choices, and evaluation.
The whole unit in one paragraph?
A full evaluated PEAL paragraph.
Where does all your analysis appear?
In the ‘A’ (Analysis) of a top-band PEAL paragraph.
Should you copy the top-band sample?
Yes — copy its MOVES (not its words) into your own writing.
Is ‘technique + effect’ enough for the top?
No — it's only mid-band; add audience, combination and evaluation.
The three rungs, in order?
Feature-spotting → technique+effect → full evaluated PEAL.
What is the purpose of an advertisement?
To persuade you to buy, choose or believe in something.
Name three features of an advert.
Any of: slogan, brand name/logo, USP, a persuasive image, a call to action.
What is a slogan?
A short, memorable phrase that sums up a brand.
What is a USP?
Unique selling point — the one thing that makes a product stand out.
What is a call to action?
A line telling the reader exactly what to do next (buy now, join today).
Name three persuasive techniques in adverts.
Any of: imperatives, direct address, flattery/aspiration, FOMO, contrast, bandwagon.
What do the best adverts really sell?
A feeling or identity (confidence, belonging, freedom) attached to the product.
What is FOMO in an advert?
Fear of missing out — 'limited', 'don't get left behind' — pushing you to act fast.
What lifts an advert analysis to the top band?
Naming the feeling sold and showing how words and image build it together.
Why analyse the image as well as the words?
In adverts the image often does much of the persuading — analyse them together.
What two things does a poster mainly rely on?
Few words + bold design (big image, size, colour).
On a poster, what does size usually signal?
Importance — the biggest element is the main message.
Why do posters use so few words?
They have only seconds to catch a passer-by, so short and bold lands fastest.
What is a 'call to action' on a poster?
The bit telling you what to do next — donate, learn more, a date or QR code.
Name three poster features to analyse.
A short punchy line, one big image, and size/colour used for emphasis.
How do you turn a colour into analysis?
Say what the colour DOES to the viewer (red = alarm), not just that it's there.
Why analyse the design, not just the words, on a poster?
There's little text, so the design (size, colour, image, layout) carries most of the meaning.
What does a single close-up face on a poster do?
Makes the cause feel personal; direct eye contact pulls the viewer in.
First question to ask of any poster?
‘What did they make biggest, and why?’
Common poster-analysis mistake?
Listing colours/features without saying what each one does to the viewer.
What is a brochure/leaflet (as a text type)?
A print text that informs and sells at once — facts wrapped in persuasion.
What two jobs does a brochure do?
Informs (facts, headings) and sells (positive words, images, call to action).
How does a brochure ‘sweeten’ facts?
With positive word choices — ‘cosy’, ‘breathtaking’, ‘just steps away’.
Why show only the best bits?
It's persuading; selecting the appealing side makes the offer look ideal.
Name three brochure features.
Headings/bullet points, positive selling language, and a call to action.
How does ‘cosy’ work for a small room?
It re-dresses the flaw of ‘small’ as a charm.
First question to ask of a brochure?
‘How does it make plain facts feel appealing?’
What does direct address do in a brochure?
Speaks to the reader (‘your perfect escape’) so the offer feels personal.
Brochure vs advert?
Both persuade; a brochure carries more information alongside the selling.
Common brochure-analysis mistake?
Treating it as pure information and missing the persuasive word choice.
What is campaign material?
A text that rallies people to act — vote, sign, join — through persuasion.
What is a slogan?
A short, memorable, repeatable line that sticks and spreads the message.
How does ‘us vs them’ persuade?
A ‘we’ against a ‘they’ builds unity and gives readers a side and an enemy.
What do emotive appeals do?
Stir hope, anger or pride so readers feel moved to act, over careful detail.
Name three campaign features.
A memorable slogan, ‘us vs them’ framing, and a clear call to action.
What does repetition do in a campaign?
Builds rhythm and momentum, hammering one idea until it sticks.
First question to ask of campaign material?
‘How does it make me feel part of something and act?’
Why always a call to action?
The whole point is to move people — it tells them exactly what to do.
Campaign material vs editorial?
An editorial argues an opinion; campaign material rallies you to take a specific action.
Common campaign-analysis mistake?
Summarising the cause instead of analysing the rhetoric that rallies the reader.
What makes a speech different from other texts?
It's written to be heard aloud by a live audience — sound, rhythm and direct address matter.
What is the usual purpose of a speech?
To persuade or inspire — to change how a live audience thinks, feels or acts.
What is rhetoric?
The art of persuasive speaking or writing.
What is anaphora?
Repeating the same words at the start of successive lines, for rhythm and force.
What is a tricolon?
A group of three, for rhythm and emphasis.
What is antithesis?
Two opposite ideas balanced against each other.
Why does inclusive 'we' work in a speech?
It unites the speaker and the crowd into one team.
What should you analyse about repetition in a speech?
What its sound does to the listening audience — not just that it's there.
Why 'hear' a speech when you analyse it?
The choices are built for the ear — you spot where the crowd would cheer or pause.
What do speeches often do across an extract?
Build to a climax — track how the rhythm and force rise.
What is a magazine 'feature'?
A longer article built to entertain and engage, not just report facts.
What is a feature's first job?
To keep you reading — it hooks and entertains even while informing.
What is a 'hook' opening?
A first line that grabs you: a surprising claim, a scene, or a question.
What is a 'standfirst'?
The teaser line under the headline summing up the article's appeal.
Name three feature techniques.
A hook opening, a distinctive voice, and vivid anecdotes/detail.
How do you analyse a feature's voice?
Name it (funny, warm, opinionated) and say what it does to the reader.
Why do features use anecdotes?
Little stories make ideas concrete and human, so they land and stick.
First question to ask of a feature?
‘How does it keep me reading?’ — analyse the craft, not just the facts.
Feature vs news report?
A feature entertains with voice and craft; a news report delivers facts plainly.
Common feature-analysis mistake?
Retelling the content instead of analysing how it entertains the reader.
What is a news report's main purpose?
To inform quickly and factually, key facts first.
What is the 'inverted pyramid'?
News structure: most important facts first, then detail and background.
What are the 5 Ws?
Who, what, where, when, why — packed into a news opening.
Why quote named sources in news?
To sound reliable and balanced; but the choice of whom to quote carries a slant.
Where does slant hide in ‘neutral’ news?
In which fact comes first, the verbs/adjectives chosen, and whose quotes appear.
‘Axe’ vs ‘end’ a service — why does the verb matter?
‘Axe’ sounds violent and sudden; ‘end’ sounds routine — the verb steers feeling.
First question to ask of a news report?
‘Which facts came first, and what words were chosen?’
What is a 'byline'?
The line naming who wrote the article.
News report vs feature article?
News delivers facts fast and plainly; a feature entertains with voice and craft.
Common news-analysis mistake?
Treating news as ‘just facts’ and missing the slant in order, wording and quotes.
What is an editorial?
A newspaper's official, unsigned opinion arguing a clear stance.
Whose voice speaks in an editorial?
The whole paper — an authoritative ‘we’, not a named writer.
Editorial vs news report?
A report informs neutrally; an editorial takes a side and argues to persuade.
Name three editorial techniques.
A clear stance, a confident ‘we’ voice, and rhetorical devices (loaded words, contrast, questions).
Why does an editorial use rhetorical questions?
To press the reader toward agreement without stating it outright.
What does loaded language (e.g. ‘betrayal’) do?
Adds strong emotion and moral judgement, steering how the reader feels.
How do editorials often end?
With a call to action or a judgement — demanding change or delivering a verdict.
First question to ask of an editorial?
‘What is its line, and how does it push me to agree?’
Why does the ‘we’ voice work?
It speaks for a whole paper, so the opinion sounds authoritative and shared.
Common editorial-analysis mistake?
Summarising the issue instead of analysing how the piece argues its stance.
What is an opinion column?
One named writer's personal, argued view on a topic, in a paper, magazine or website.
What is the purpose of a column?
To persuade you round to the writer's view, or to make you think — often to provoke.
Who is the audience of a column?
The publication's regular readers, who often half-share its outlook.
What is a persona?
The personality a writer performs on the page — witty, angry, warm.
What is an anecdote, and why use one?
A short personal story; it grounds the argument in real life.
What is sarcasm?
Saying the opposite of what you mean, to mock.
Name three column techniques.
Any of: first-person voice, anecdote-to-argument, humour/sarcasm, hyperbole, rhetorical questions.
Is a column meant to be balanced?
No — it's proudly one-sided; the point is the writer's take.
What's the key move analysing a column?
Link the voice and tone to how they persuade, and find the argument beneath.
How does humour persuade in a column?
It makes the writer likeable and pulls the reader onto their side.
What is an interview (as a text type)?
A text that reveals a person through their own words, shaped by an interviewer.
How does an interview reveal character?
Through the subject's word choice and tone — how they say things.
Why do the interviewer's questions matter?
They steer the subject; a pointed question sets up a revealing answer.
What does ‘framing’ mean in an interview?
How quotes are selected, ordered and annotated to shape the portrait.
Name three interview features.
Question-and-answer form, the interviewer's angle, and self-revealing word choice.
Why note ‘(pause)’ or ‘(laughs)’?
The chosen detail colours how the reader reads the reply.
What does ‘Mistakes were made’ reveal about a speaker?
Evasion — the passive phrasing dodges personal blame.
First question to ask of an interview?
‘What do their words reveal, and how did the question and framing shape them?’
Should you treat every quote as the full truth?
No — quotes are selected and framed; read them as a shaped portrait.
Common interview-analysis mistake?
Taking the subject's words at face value and ignoring the interviewer's framing.
What is a review (as a text type)?
A text that gives a verdict on something and helps the reader decide.
What is a review's core job?
To judge — is it any good? — and back it with evidence.
Why must a review give evidence?
So the verdict is earned with specific reasons, not just ‘I liked it’.
Why do reviews have a strong voice?
They entertain as they judge; the witty voice is half the appeal.
Name three review features.
A clear verdict, evidence for it, and a lively voice that guides the reader.
How do you analyse a review's joke?
Show how it both judges (evidence) and entertains (voice) at once.
First question to ask of a review?
‘What's the verdict, and how is it proved and performed?’
What does a review guide the reader to do?
Decide — is this worth their time or money?
Review vs advert?
A review can criticise honestly; an advert only ever sells.
Common review-analysis mistake?
Saying only whether the reviewer liked it, not how the verdict is proved and performed.
What is a blog?
An informal, personal piece written online — like a public diary or a friend talking to you.
What is a blog's purpose?
To share experience or opinion, entertain, and connect with followers.
Who is a blog's audience?
Followers and casual online readers — often young, treated like friends.
What is informal register?
Relaxed, everyday language, like friendly speech.
What is a fragment?
An incomplete sentence used for effect.
What is self-deprecation?
Gently making fun of yourself.
Name three blog techniques.
Any of: direct address, fragments, humour/self-deprecation, honesty, a closing nudge to comment.
Why are a blog's slang and fragments deliberate?
They build a friendly, trustworthy, real-sounding voice.
What does a blog's informal voice achieve?
It makes the writer relatable and trustworthy — and so persuasive.
What is a closing nudge in a blog?
A warm call to engage ('tell me in the comments') that builds community.
How is a website read?
Scanned, not read word-for-word — headings and images guide skimming.
What is a 'call to action' on a website?
The button/link for the click they want (Buy, Join, Sign up, Donate).
Why do websites use direct address (‘you’)?
It makes the service feel personal and speaks to each visitor.
What is 'visual hierarchy'?
The way size, colour and position steer the eye to what matters most first.
Name three website features to analyse.
Headings for scanning, a clear call to action, and image/layout hierarchy.
First question to ask of a web page?
‘Where does the design send my eye — and my click?’
Why is the biggest element analysed first?
Hierarchy: size and position signal what the page wants you to notice first.
Website vs printed poster?
Both use design, but a site adds clickable calls to action and navigation.
How do you turn a button into analysis?
Say what its colour/placement DOES — pulls the eye, makes the action feel easy.
Common website-analysis mistake?
Reading only the paragraphs and ignoring design, buttons and hierarchy.
What is a social media post (as a text type)?
A very short, informal text built to relate and be shared quickly.
Why is a social post so short?
It has seconds to stop a scroll, so it works through brevity, tone and image.
Why analyse image and caption together?
They play off each other; the meaning is in the combination, not either alone.
What do hashtags do in a post?
Set a tone and tag it to a community or shared mood.
What do emojis add?
Tone and feeling in a tiny space — irony, warmth, humour.
Name three social-post features.
A short punchy caption, image+caption interplay, and hashtags/emojis.
What is the ‘pull to engage’?
The way a post invites a like, share, reply or tag.
First question to ask of a social post?
‘How does it earn a like or a share in seconds?’
Is a post ‘too short to analyse’?
No — the brevity is the craft; every word, emoji and hashtag is a choice.
Common social-post analysis mistake?
Dismissing it as too short, instead of analysing tone, image and hashtags.
What is a transcript?
A written record of real speech, kept exactly — hesitations, pauses and all.
Why keep the ‘um’s and pauses?
They're evidence — signs of nerves, thinking, uncertainty or power.
What do interruptions reveal?
Who cuts in and who is cut off shows who holds the power.
What does turn length show?
One person dominating vs one-word replies reveals the balance of power.
What are non-verbal notes like ‘(pause)’ for?
They record how something is said, not just what — tone and manner.
What can fillers (‘um’, ‘I mean’) reveal?
Nerves, uncertainty, or a speaker thinking on their feet.
First question to ask of a transcript?
‘How does the WAY they speak reveal character and power?’
Should you tidy up the speech before analysing?
No — the stumbles and interruptions are the evidence you analyse.
Transcript vs interview article?
A transcript keeps speech raw; an interview article selects and polishes quotes.
Common transcript-analysis mistake?
Analysing only the topic and ignoring the speech features that reveal character.
What is an infographic?
Information shown through pictures, numbers and a few words, so it's quick to grasp.
What is an infographic's purpose?
To inform — and very often to persuade, by making a point feel obvious.
Why analyse the visuals, not just the words?
Colour, size, icons and layout are deliberate choices carrying half the meaning.
What is visual hierarchy?
How size and position guide the eye to the main point first.
What is colour coding?
Using colours to signal meaning — green good, red danger.
What is an icon?
A simple picture that stands for an idea.
Why do big numbers work in an infographic?
A huge stat grabs the eye and makes the scale feel shocking or impressive.
What is the strongest move analysing an infographic?
Showing how a word and a visual work together to make a meaning neither could alone.
What does red usually signal in an infographic?
Danger or a negative — while green signals good.
Where is the main message in an infographic?
Usually the biggest item at the top of the visual hierarchy.
What is a political cartoon?
A single funny, exaggerated image that criticises the news through symbols and satire.
What is the purpose of a political cartoon?
To persuade and criticise through satire — mocking something to change how you see it.
What is satire?
Using humour or mockery to criticise something.
What is caricature?
A drawing that exaggerates a person's features to mock a trait.
What is a symbol in a cartoon?
An object that stands for a bigger idea (a dove = peace, a flag = a nation).
How does size work in a cartoon?
Big vs tiny shows power vs weakness.
What does the caption do?
Pins down who's meant and often flips or sharpens the meaning with irony.
What's the key move analysing a cartoon?
Decode each symbol into a meaning, then state the criticism.
Why read every detail in a cartoon?
Nothing is spare — each symbol, label and size is a deliberate choice.
What must your cartoon analysis always name?
The point — the criticism the cartoon argues.
What is a comic strip (as a text type)?
A story told in a sequence of panels using images and words together.
What is the 'gutter'?
The gap between panels; readers fill it in, and it controls timing.
Why does panel order matter?
Setup then payoff — the sequence builds the meaning or joke.
What do speech/thought bubbles show?
Dialogue or thoughts; their shape and size signal tone and volume.
What does exaggeration do in a comic?
Cartoon shorthand — big eyes, sweat drops — quickly shows feeling.
Where is the joke often carried?
In the final panel (the twist) and the gap between panels.
First question to ask of a comic strip?
‘How do the panels and their order build the meaning or joke?’
How do you analyse a bubble's shape?
Say what it signals — a tiny shaky bubble = a timid, weak voice.
Comic strip vs single cartoon?
A strip uses several panels in sequence; a cartoon is one image.
Common comic-analysis mistake?
Describing each panel separately and missing the sequence, gaps and twist.
Why isn't a photo neutral?
The photographer chose the frame, angle, focus, light and moment.
What does 'framing' mean in a photo?
What's included and excluded — the edges are a deliberate choice.
What can a low camera angle do?
Make a subject loom and feel powerful or imposing.
Why does a caption matter?
A few words anchor the meaning; a new caption changes how we read the image.
Name three photo choices to analyse.
Framing (in/out), angle and focus, and light/colour.
How does light build mood?
Warm light feels safe; harsh shadow feels tense — light sets the feeling.
First question to ask of a photograph?
‘What did the photographer choose to show, and how?’
Why consider what's left OUT of a frame?
Exclusion is a choice too — what's missing can shape meaning as much as what's in.
Photograph vs painting?
Both are composed, but a photo also carries a claim of ‘this really happened’.
Common photo-analysis mistake?
Describing the contents instead of analysing the choices and the caption.
What is a documentary (as a text type)?
A film about a real subject whose viewpoint is shaped by narration and selection.
Why isn't a documentary pure fact?
Narration, chosen footage, tone and music all select and shape a viewpoint.
What does narration (voiceover) do?
Guides how you read the images; its word choice sets the angle.
How does selection shape a documentary?
What's shown and left out builds the argument, even while feeling factual.
How do tone and music work?
They steer feeling — solemn, urgent or hopeful — under the ‘facts’.
Why does the ‘fact’ framing matter?
Claiming to show reality makes the viewpoint feel objective and trustworthy.
First question to ask of a documentary?
‘Whose viewpoint is this, and how is it built?’
Loaded narration example?
Calling a plan ‘an experiment on a town’ casts residents as test subjects.
Documentary vs news report?
Both claim fact, but a documentary crafts a sustained viewpoint through narration and footage.
Common documentary-analysis mistake?
Treating it as pure fact and missing how narration and selection build a viewpoint.
What is a film still?
A single frame from a film, in which everything is deliberately arranged.
What is 'mise-en-scène'?
Everything arranged in the frame — setting, lighting, costume, props, position.
How does lighting/colour work in a still?
Warm light feels safe; cold blue or harsh shadow feels tense or sad.
What does a high camera angle suggest?
The subject looks small, weak or vulnerable.
What does position in the frame show?
Placement (centre/edge, big/small, high/low) signals power and mood.
Name three film-still elements to analyse.
Setting/props, lighting/colour, and position of people in the frame.
First question to ask of a film still?
‘What has the director arranged in this frame, and why?’
What do costume and props reveal?
Clues to who a character is, their situation and how they feel.
Film still vs photograph?
Both are composed; a still is a frame from a constructed fiction, rich in mise-en-scène.
Common film-still analysis mistake?
Describing the scene instead of analysing the arrangement and what it suggests.
What is a letter (as a text type)?
A text written to one particular reader, revealing a relationship and purpose.
What does the salutation tell you?
The formality and relationship — ‘Dear Sir’ vs ‘Hey you’ set the tone.
What does 'register' mean here?
The level of formality — formal and distant vs intimate and warm.
Why does direct address matter in a letter?
A letter speaks to a specific ‘you’; how it treats them reveals the relationship.
Name three letter features to analyse.
Salutation/sign-off, register (formal/intimate), and the writer's purpose.
What can icy formal politeness signal?
Anger held under control — politeness used as a cold weapon.
First question to ask of a letter?
‘What is the relationship, and what does the writer want?’
What purposes can a letter have?
To thank, complain, persuade, apologise or console — it wants something.
Letter vs email/social post?
A letter is addressed to one named reader with a clear salutation and sign-off.
Common letter-analysis mistake?
Summarising the content and ignoring tone, address and register.
What is a memoir (as a text type)?
A true, first-person recollection reflecting on a real moment from the writer's life.
Why does memoir use sensory detail?
Specific sights, sounds and smells make the memory feel real and carry feeling.
What is 'reflection' in memoir?
The older narrator adding what they understand now that they didn't then.
How does a small moment carry big meaning?
An ordinary event is made to stand for something larger — growing up, loss, love.
Name three memoir features.
First-person looking back, vivid sensory detail, and reflection/hindsight.
What is the now-voice vs then-self?
The older narrator recalls a younger self, often adding later understanding.
First question to ask of a memoir?
‘Why does this small memory matter to the writer?’
Memoir vs autobiography?
Memoir focuses on select meaningful moments, not a whole life story in order.
Memoir vs fiction?
Memoir presents itself as a true recollection; fiction is invented.
Common memoir-analysis mistake?
Retelling the events instead of analysing the detail and reflection that make meaning.
What is travel writing?
A first-person account bringing a place alive through sensory detail and voice.
Why does the writer's voice matter?
Their personality colours the place and shapes our experience of it.
Why use sensory description?
Sights, sounds and smells put the reader right there in the place.
What is observation + reflection?
Noticing the place AND what the writer thinks or feels about it.
Name three travel-writing features.
Sensory description, a personal voice, and selected telling detail.
Why select one telling detail?
A single vivid detail brings a scene alive more than a full list would.
First question to ask of travel writing?
‘How does the writer make me feel this place and their response to it?’
Travel writing vs a guidebook?
A guidebook informs plainly; travel writing shares a personal, felt experience.
What tones can a travel voice take?
Dry, awestruck, weary, curious — the voice shapes how we feel the place.
Common travel-writing analysis mistake?
Listing the sights instead of analysing the detail and voice that convey experience.
What is an essay (as a text type)?
A text that explores an idea, developing a line of thought in a distinctive voice.
Why does an essay's structure matter?
It builds — claim, complication, question — so the argument feels like a journey.
What makes an essay's voice distinctive?
A real mind speaking — thoughtful, witty or provocative, not a textbook.
How does an essay use evidence?
It supports ideas with examples, observations or small stories.
Name three essay features.
A guiding idea, a distinctive voice, and development/turns in the argument.
What does a ‘not X, but Y’ move do?
Reframes a familiar idea more sharply, making it feel fresh.
First question to ask of an essay?
‘How does the argument develop, and how does the voice carry me?’
Why might an essay open with a personal story?
To draw the reader in before widening to the bigger idea.
Essay vs opinion column?
Both argue; an essay tends to explore and develop a thought more openly and at length.
Common essay-analysis mistake?
Stating the conclusion instead of analysing how the thought develops and the voice engages.
What is a literary extract (as a text type)?
A piece of prose fiction that builds a world and feeling through narrative craft.
What builds meaning in fiction?
Narrative craft — voice, POV, imagery, selected detail — not just plot.
Why does point of view matter?
Who tells it, and how, shapes what we know and how we feel.
How does selected detail work?
A chosen small detail reveals character or setting (a habit shows a nature).
What does imagery do in fiction?
Metaphor and vivid images build mood and meaning, not just decoration.
Name three literary-extract features.
Narrative voice/POV, selected detail, and imagery/atmosphere.
First question to ask of a literary extract?
‘How does the WAY it's told create character and mood?’
How can action reveal feeling without stating it?
A telling gesture (folding a letter smaller and smaller) carries the emotion.
Literary extract vs memoir?
A literary extract is fiction; memoir presents a true recollection.
Common literary-extract analysis mistake?
Retelling the plot instead of analysing the craft that builds character and mood.
What is a poem (as a text type)?
A compressed text where word, line break and sound are all chosen for meaning.
Why do line breaks matter?
Where a line ends creates a pause and emphasis; the shape is a choice.
What is 'compression' in poetry?
Cutting everything inessential so every remaining word carries weight.
What does imagery do in a poem?
Metaphor and vivid pictures pack feeling into very few words.
What sound features can a poem use?
Rhythm, rhyme, alliteration, repetition — meaning you can hear.
Name three things to analyse in a poem.
Form/line breaks, imagery, and sound.
First question to ask of a poem?
‘Why THIS word, and why does the line break HERE?’
What is sibilance?
Repeated soft ‘s’ sounds, often creating a hushed or hissing effect.
Poem vs prose extract?
A poem uses line breaks, sound and extreme compression as central tools.
Common poem-analysis mistake?
Paraphrasing the meaning instead of analysing the form, sound and word choice.
What is Paper 1?
A guided analysis of unseen non-literary text(s): SL one [20], HL two [40].
What is the core move of a guided analysis?
Feature → effect → meaning: name the choice, explain its effect, link it to meaning/purpose.
What is a guiding question?
A question pointing you to a central feature of the text; you may answer it or choose your own focus.
What is a thesis in Paper 1?
Your one-sentence overall answer that the whole analysis supports.
Give the sentence stem that scores.
‘By [choice], the writer [effect], which [meaning/purpose].’
Feature-spotting vs analysis?
Feature-spotting names devices; analysis explains their effect and meaning. Only analysis scores well.
What does ‘tone’ mean?
The writer's attitude — e.g. urgent, dry, angry, warm.
What does ‘register’ mean?
How formal or informal the language is, and who it suits.
Which criterion rewards evaluating how choices shape meaning?
Criterion B — analysis and evaluation.
What must you analyse in a visual text type?
Visual choices — layout, image, colour — as well as the words.
Name the four Paper 1 criteria.
A Understanding, B Analysis and evaluation, C Focus and organization, D Language.
Is answering the guiding question compulsory?
No — but your analysis must stay focused and supported.
What is the guiding question FOR?
A suggested way in — a focus so your analysis doesn't wander.
First move with the guiding question?
Underline its focus and turn it into a one-sentence thesis.
What does your thesis decide?
Which choices you analyse — only those that prove it.
Can you argue a different focus?
Yes — if it's stronger, as long as you stay focused and support it.
Which criterion most rewards focus?
Criterion C — focus and organisation.
Focus or coverage?
Focus — one clear argued line beats listing every device.
Where does the thesis go?
In your introduction, as the claim the whole essay proves.
Common mistake?
Restating the question then listing every device with no thesis.
What do you do with choices that don't serve your focus?
Ignore them — they dilute the argument.
What are the four Paper 1 criteria?
A Understanding · B Analysis & evaluation · C Focus & organisation · D Language.
Criterion A rewards…
Understanding and interpretation, supported by well-chosen references.
Criterion B rewards…
Analysis AND evaluation of the writer's choices (not feature-spotting).
Criterion C rewards…
A focused, well-organised response (intro, paragraphs, conclusion).
Criterion D rewards…
Clear, precise, academic and accurate language (your own writing).
How is each criterion scored at SL?
Each out of 5 — total /20.
Where do most students lose marks?
B (describing not evaluating) and C (listing devices, no focus).
Can one good sentence hit several criteria?
Yes — an evaluated, quoted, precisely-worded point hits A, B and D at once.
What earns Criterion C across the essay?
Keeping every paragraph pointed at one clear thesis.
Do the criteria matter equally?
Yes — each is /5; don't chase one and neglect the others.
What is the most-set Paper 1 text type?
The article (print or online) — set most often across recent papers.
Name four conventions of an article.
Headline, byline, lede/hook, and a clear angle (plus standfirst; online adds images and subheadings).
What is an article's 'angle'?
The particular slant or argument it takes — what it wants you to think or feel.
What is the 'lede' or hook?
The opening line or paragraph, built to pull the reader in.
What should you analyse in an article?
Headline, voice and tone, diction and imagery, structure, authority (data/quotes), and direct address.
What extra choices does an ONLINE article add?
Image, caption, subheadings and layout — all analysable.
What have real article guiding questions asked about?
Diction and imagery, figurative language, narrative structure, and how the article persuades.
How do you analyse an article's imagery well?
Feature → effect → meaning: name the image, explain its effect, link it to the article's angle.
What is 'authority' in an article?
Facts, statistics, expert quotes or anecdote used to make the angle credible.
Biggest article mistake to avoid?
Treating it as neutral information and missing the angle — or listing devices without linking them to persuasion.
How many times should you read the text?
Twice — once for gist, once with a pen for choices.
Annotate for plot or for choices?
For choices and their effects — never plot summary.
What does each margin note record?
The effect of the choice, in one word.
What should you circle?
Shifts / turns — where tone, tense or focus changes.
What is the first read for?
The gist — subject, audience, overall tone (no pen).
Why annotate before writing?
It front-loads thinking so writing is fast and focused.
What becomes your essay plan?
Your margin notes — the choice+effect marks.
Kinds of choice to hunt?
Word choice, imagery, sentence length, structure, layout.
Common mistake?
Underlining lines but writing summaries, not effects.
Why are ‘turns’ valuable?
A shift in tone/focus is a deliberate structural choice, rich to analyse.
How long should planning take?
About five minutes — it makes writing faster and more focused.
What is a thesis?
A one-sentence answer to your focus that the whole essay proves.
Paragraph per device or per effect?
Per effect/idea — each is a sub-point of the thesis.
How do you form paragraphs from annotations?
Cluster margin notes by their effect / idea.
How many body paragraphs?
Usually 3–4, each a clear sub-point.
How should paragraphs be ordered?
So the argument builds (e.g. opening→turn→ending, or surface→deeper).
Which criterion does planning most help?
Criterion C — focus and organisation.
Common mistake?
A paragraph per device — a list, not an argument.
Does planning slow you down?
No — it makes the writing faster because you're following a map.
What does each paragraph's mini-point do?
Proves one part of the overall thesis.
The three moves of a Paper 1 intro?
Identify the text, state your thesis, signpost your argument.
How long should the intro be?
Three or four sentences.
What does ‘identify the text’ mean?
Name its type, purpose and audience.
What is the thesis?
Your one-sentence answer to the focus, which the essay proves.
What does ‘signpost’ mean?
Preview your 2–3 main points so the structure is clear.
Two things to AVOID in an intro?
Plot summary and grand ‘throughout history’ openings.
Which criteria does a good intro set up?
C (organisation) and A (understanding) from the first line.
Most important single sentence?
The thesis.
Should you retell the text?
No — identify it, don't summarise it.
Why signpost?
So the examiner sees your line of argument coming.
What does each body paragraph make?
One sub-point of your thesis.
The body-paragraph shape?
Topic sentence → embedded quote → evaluated analysis → link to thesis.
How should you quote in Paper 1?
Short and embedded — a few words, never long blocks.
What must the analysis do (Criterion B)?
Analyse AND evaluate — technique → effect → how well it works.
How should each paragraph end?
With a link back to your thesis.
Why keep the same paragraph shape?
So you never freeze — you always know the next move.
One point or many per paragraph?
One — a single sub-point of the thesis.
What proves Criterion C in the body?
Each paragraph linking back to the thesis.
Common mistake?
Drifting across unrelated points or quoting long chunks.
A topic sentence is…
The opening mini-claim that states the paragraph's sub-point.
The three moves of a conclusion?
Reword the thesis, combine your points, land on the overall effect.
Should a conclusion add new analysis?
No — no new points or quotes.
What question does a conclusion answer?
‘So what?’ — the overall effect on the reader.
Reword or repeat the thesis?
Reword — same idea in fresh words, not copy-paste.
How long should a conclusion be?
Two or three sentences.
What does ‘combine your points’ mean?
Show how your 2–3 sub-points add up to one argument.
Which criteria does the conclusion serve?
C (one coherent argument) and B (an evaluative overview).
Common weak conclusion?
Just re-listing the devices, or copying the intro.
Should you apologise for time?
No — never apologise in the essay.
How do you end?
On the overall effect — then stop.
How long is SL Paper 1?
1 hour 15 minutes, for one guided analysis.
A good time split?
~15 min plan · ~55 min write · ~5 min check.
How long for planning?
About 15 minutes — read twice, annotate, thesis + plan.
How long per body paragraph (3 points)?
Roughly 12–15 minutes each.
The biggest time mistake?
Overrunning early and leaving no time for a conclusion.
Complete essay or perfect half?
Complete — an unfinished essay loses Criterion C.
When should you plan the time?
Before you start writing.
What must the last ~5 minutes be for?
A conclusion and a quick check for slips.
How do you avoid overrunning?
Watch the clock at each paragraph; pace evenly.
Should you copy out the whole passage?
No — it wastes time; annotate instead.
The big four Paper 1 mistakes?
Feature-spotting, summary, no focus, ignoring the reader.
What is feature-spotting?
Naming a device without saying what it achieves.
Fix for feature-spotting?
Add the effect (and evaluate how well it works).
Why is summary a mistake?
It retells the text instead of analysing choices; it earns almost nothing.
Fix for ‘no focus’?
Write a thesis and make every paragraph prove it.
Fix for ignoring the reader?
Link each point to the audience or the effect on the reader.
Which criteria does feature-spotting cost?
Criterion B (analysis and evaluation).
Which criteria do summary/no-focus cost?
A (understanding) and C (focus and organisation).
The sneaky disguised mistake?
‘Uses a metaphor to show a metaphor’ — naming with no real effect.
Self-check question as you write?
Effect given? Summary avoided? Focus kept? Reader linked?
The grade-7 analysis shape?
Intro + thesis, three evaluated linked paragraphs, a conclusion.
What does the intro do?
Identifies the advert and states a thesis (how it persuades).
How are paragraphs organised?
By effect — each an evaluated point linked to the reader and thesis.
What lifts advert analysis to grade 7?
Evaluating effects and linking to the audience and thesis.
Should you memorise the wording?
No — copy the method; the exam text is unseen.
In this advert, what is the ‘enemy’?
The reader's week / Monday — personified as an aggressor.
The advert's cleverest move?
Reframing buying as earned self-care (‘you have survived enough’).
What does the reader ‘buy’?
Comfort and forgiveness — not caffeine.
Where does the conclusion land?
On the overall effect — an emotional, not practical, purchase.
Personification of the coffee does what?
Makes it a warm, forgiving companion — a relationship, not a flavour.
What do you analyse in a column?
HOW the writer argues (tone, voice, rhetoric, structure) — not whether you agree.
Does the method change for a column?
No — same thesis-led, evaluated, linked shape; only the text type differs.
The column's central reframing?
‘Contact’ is not the same as ‘connection’.
Effect of the opening paradox?
Turns a comfort (‘staying in touch’) into a symptom of loneliness.
Why the personal confession?
It makes the writer a fellow sufferer — honest, not preachy.
Effect of ‘wave at a passing car’?
A vivid simile capturing the thinness of online acknowledgement.
What does the concession ‘I am not against the phone’ do?
Pre-empts the reader's defence, making the argument feel fair.
The closing antithesis does what?
Crystallises contact vs connection in two balanced sentences.
Where does the conclusion land?
On the overall effect — a familiar word redefined, the reader unsettled.
Learn the wording or the method?
The method — the exam text is unseen.
The goal of timed practice?
A complete, focused essay in the real time — not a perfect one.
The time split to rehearse?
~15 min plan · ~55 min write · ~5 min check.
What does panic try to skip?
The planning — but the plan makes the essay fast and focused.
How long is SL Paper 1?
1 hour 15 minutes.
The full routine?
Annotate → thesis → three evaluated linked paragraphs → conclusion.
Complete or perfect?
Complete — a finished essay beats a perfect fragment.
How do you make the method automatic?
Repeat the full timed routine until the shape is a habit.
Which criteria does timed practice rehearse?
All four (A–D) at once.
First thing to do with the unseen text?
Read it twice and annotate for choices.
Last thing before the clock stops?
A conclusion and a quick check for slips.
How many works in Paper 2?
Two literary works you have studied.
How many questions do you answer?
One, chosen from four general questions.
Open or closed book?
Closed — no text; use detailed reference, not memorised quotes.
How long / how many marks (SL & HL)?
1 hour 45 minutes, [25].
The unique Paper 2 criterion?
B2 — comparison (comparing the works, not reviewing them in turn).
The biggest Paper 2 mistake?
Two separate mini-essays instead of one woven comparison.
How should paragraphs be organised?
By shared idea — each discusses BOTH works, not one then the other.
Do you need quotations?
No — but you need precise, detailed reference to the works.
How should you choose your two works?
So both fit the question AND differ interestingly.
What is the goal of the essay?
One comparative argument about both works — similarities AND differences.
How long is Paper 2?
1 hour 45 minutes, for one comparative essay [25].
Most important early decision?
Choosing the question your two prepared works genuinely fit.
A good time split?
~10 min choose & plan · ~90 min write · ~5 min check.
Why does question choice matter so much?
The wrong question strains the whole essay; the right one plays to your works.
Two classic Paper 2 time failures?
A question your works don't fit; and running out of time with no conclusion.
What must the plan be?
A by-point comparison (a thesis + shared points), not two reviews.
What must the last ~5 minutes be for?
A conclusion and a quick check for slips.
Choose the ‘best’ question or the fitting one?
The one YOUR works fit best.
How do you pace 90 minutes of writing?
Steadily across intro + comparative paragraphs; watch the clock.
Complete essay or perfect fragment?
Complete — always finish with a conclusion.
The big four Paper 2 mistakes?
Two mini-essays, plot summary, off-question drift, uneven works.
The ‘two mini-essays’ mistake?
Writing about A then B with no genuine comparison.
Why is plot summary a mistake?
It retells instead of analysing and comparing choices.
Fix for two mini-essays?
Weave both works into comparative paragraphs on shared points.
Fix for off-question drift?
Re-read the prompt; answer the ACTUAL general question.
Fix for uneven works?
Give both works roughly equal weight and analysis.
Which criterion does two-mini-essays cost?
B2 — comparison.
Which criteria does summary cost?
A (understanding) and B1 (analysis).
The sneaky hidden mistake?
A ‘similarly’ dropped between two separate discussions — still not a comparison.
Self-check as you write?
Comparing? Analysing? On the set question? Both works balanced?
The grade-7 Paper 2 shape?
Comparative thesis → woven evaluated comparative paragraphs → conclusion with a payoff.
What does the thesis do?
Makes one arguable claim about both works.
How are paragraphs built?
Each covers both works on one point, analysing AND comparing choices.
What lifts a comparison to grade 7?
Weaving, evaluation, and a conclusion that reveals something.
Memorise wording or method?
Method — your works are your own.
In this exemplar, both works reject courage as…
Spectacle / visible applauded action.
Where do both locate real courage?
In an unseen, repeated act (staying; writing the letters).
The conclusion's payoff here?
Real courage is the kind no one thinks to applaud.
Which criteria does the exemplar hit?
All five: A, B1, B2, C, D.
Two mini-essays vs grade 7?
Grade 7 weaves both works in every paragraph; two mini-essays don't.
The goal of the timed mock?
A complete, focused, genuinely comparative essay in the real time.
The time split to rehearse?
~10 min choose & plan · ~90 min write · ~5 min check.
What does panic try to skip?
The choose-and-plan — but it makes the essay fit and flow.
How long is Paper 2?
1 hour 45 minutes.
The full routine?
Choose the fitting question → thesis + by-point plan → woven paragraphs → conclusion.
Complete or perfect?
Complete — a finished comparison beats a perfect fragment.
How do you make the method automatic?
Repeat the full timed routine until the shape is a habit.
Which criteria does the mock rehearse?
All five (A, B1, B2, C, D) at once.
First decision in the mock?
Which question your two works genuinely fit.
Last thing before the clock stops?
A conclusion with a payoff and a quick check.
How long is the IO?
15 minutes: 10 prepared + 5 of examiner questions.
How is the IO marked?
Out of 40 — criteria A–D, each out of 10.
What two works does the IO use?
One literary work and one non-literary body of work.
What is a global issue?
A real-world concern (power, migration, identity…) explored through both works.
What must the IO be organised around?
One global issue present in both works.
Is the IO a summary or a talk?
No — a focused analytical argument about authorial choices.
What is the IO worth?
30% at SL, 20% at HL.
The four criteria?
A knowledge (works+issue), B analysis, C focus/organisation, D language.
Where do half the marks come from?
A + B — knowledge and analysis of authorial choices.
The IO task in one line?
How do a literary and a non-literary work each explore one global issue?
What makes a global issue ‘good’?
Global, specific, and genuinely present in both works through choices.
The five IB fields of inquiry?
Culture/identity/community; beliefs/values/education; politics/power/justice; art/creativity; science/tech/environment.
Why is ‘power’ alone weak?
Too broad to explore analytically in ten minutes — narrow it.
The two traps?
Too broad to explore, or barely present in one work (forced).
How do you narrow a field to an issue?
Make it precise: ‘power’ → ‘how power hides behind politeness’.
Must the issue be in both works?
Yes — genuinely, through authorial choices, not a passing mention.
Which criterion rests on the issue?
Criterion A — knowledge of the works and the global issue.
Topic vs global issue?
A topic is broad (‘society’); a global issue is a specific real-world concern.
A global issue must be…
Global (real-world), specific (10-min explorable), and analysable.
Why does the issue matter so much?
It's the spine of the whole IO — it focuses every point.
How long should each extract be?
About 40 lines — short but rich.
What makes an extract ‘rich’?
Dense with authorial choices about your global issue — analysable for minutes.
Why avoid a plot-heavy extract?
You'd summarise events instead of analysing choices.
How many extracts, from where?
One from the literary work, one from the non-literary body of work.
Should the extract be your favourite scene?
Only if it's also dense with choices about your issue.
What should the extract represent?
How the whole work treats the global issue.
Which criterion does a rich extract serve?
Criterion B — analysis of authorial choices.
Event-heavy vs choice-heavy?
Choose choice-heavy — events get summarised, choices get analysed.
The test for an extract?
Can you analyse it for minutes, not describe it in seconds?
Both extracts must explore…
The same global issue.
Topic vs line of inquiry?
A topic names what you'll discuss; a line of inquiry is your argument about it.
What must the line of inquiry cover?
Both works — the literary and the non-literary.
Why do you need one?
It keeps the oral focused (Criterion C) — otherwise it's a list.
A line of inquiry argues…
HOW each work explores the global issue.
Must it be developable?
Yes — rich enough to sustain ten minutes of analysis.
What does every point in the oral do?
Develops the line of inquiry.
Which criterion does it serve most?
Criterion C — focus and organisation.
The commonest weak IO?
One built on a topic, not an argument — it becomes a list.
How specific should it be?
Specific enough to argue, broad enough to develop for ten minutes.
Line of inquiry in one line?
One developable argument about how both works explore the issue.
What connects the two works?
The global issue — the bridge you cross on every point.
Weave or stack?
Weave — move between the works point by point.
Why avoid ‘five minutes each’?
It produces two separate talks, not one connected argument.
What language connects the works?
‘Similarly’, ‘by contrast’, ‘where the novel…, the campaign…’.
Which criterion does connecting serve?
Criterion C — focus and organisation.
How should you organise the oral?
By points about the issue, each crossing both works.
The IO version of ‘two mini-essays’?
Doing all the literary work, then all the non-literary work.
What often differs between the works?
The literary and non-literary work treat the issue differently — say why.
What should each point cross?
Both works.
Connecting the works in one line?
Issue as bridge; weave the works point by point.
The five parts of the IO structure?
Open, extract 1, extract 2, widen to whole works, conclude.
How long is the opening?
About one minute — issue + line of inquiry.
How long per extract?
About 2.5 minutes of close analysis each.
What is the ‘widen’ section?
Stepping out to how each WHOLE work treats the issue.
Why signpost?
So the examiner can follow — it shows control (Criterion C).
The commonest structural failure?
Running out of time by overspending on the first extract.
Which criterion is structure?
Criterion C — focus and organisation.
What does the conclusion do?
Says what the two works together reveal about the issue.
How do you avoid running out of time?
Time each section and rehearse the whole to length.
Structure in one line?
Open → extract 1 → extract 2 → whole works → conclude, signposted and timed.
What two questions drive comparison?
‘Same or different?’ and ‘…and so what?’
What is connective language?
Joining words that signal comparison: both, whereas, similarly, unlike.
Do similarities or differences earn more?
Usually differences — they show each work's individuality.
A connective for similarity?
‘both’, ‘likewise’, ‘similarly’, ‘in the same way’.
A connective for difference?
‘whereas’, ‘unlike’, ‘by contrast’, ‘however’.
Why is ‘both are about love’ weak?
It's a bare similarity with no ‘so what?’ and no difference.
Which criterion rewards comparison?
Criterion B2 — comparison and contrast.
What makes comparison visible to the examiner?
Connective language weaving the works together.
The comparative habit in one line?
‘Same or different — and so what?’, then connect.
Comparison is first a habit of…
…mind — you already compare films, friends, routes every day.
Notes or a memorised script?
Notes — a script sounds flat and derails if you lose your place.
Why signpost as you speak?
So the examiner can follow your structure — it shows control.
What phrasing sounds analytical?
‘This suggests’, ‘the effect is’, ‘the writer's choice here…’.
How fast should you speak?
A steady pace — don't rush; use short pauses for weight.
What should your notes contain?
Brief bullet points and key quotations, not full sentences.
Which criteria does delivery support?
D (language) and C (organisation).
The risk of reading notes in a monotone?
It hides your analysis — deliver with pace and signposting.
What are you demonstrating in the IO?
Thinking through an argument, not performing a monologue.
A short pause before a key point…
Gives it weight and control.
Delivery in one line?
Notes, steady pace, signposting, analytical phrasing — think aloud.
What are the examiner's questions FOR?
To let you extend, defend or complicate your analysis — go deeper.
Is the discussion marked separately?
No — under the same criteria (A–D) as the prepared oral.
The worst way to answer?
Ignoring the question and repeating your prepared oral.
First step when answering?
Listen — answer the ACTUAL question, not the one you'd prefer.
How should you answer?
Directly, then develop it with evidence from the works.
What should every answer stay grounded in?
The texts — support with evidence, not vague opinion.
How long is the discussion?
About five minutes.
A question about an unprepared aspect?
Attempt a thoughtful, text-based answer — don't evade.
What can a good discussion do to your marks?
Lift them — thoughtful answers develop your analysis.
The discussion in one line?
Listen, answer directly, develop with evidence — go deeper.
The grade-7 IO shape?
Issue + line of inquiry → close woven analysis of two extracts → widen → conclude.
What does the opening do?
Names the global issue and states the line of inquiry.
How are the extracts analysed?
Closely, and woven — crossing between the works.
What is the ‘widening’?
Showing how each WHOLE work treats the issue beyond the extract.
What lifts an IO to grade 7?
A sharp line of inquiry, woven analysis, and a conclusion that reveals something.
Memorise wording or moves?
Moves — your works are your own.
In this exemplar, war is presented as…
A story sold to the young — the poster writes it, the poem exposes its silence.
The conclusion's payoff here?
The story is authored by those who won't have to die inside it.
Which criteria does the exemplar hit?
All four IO criteria: A, B, C, D.
Two separate talks vs grade 7?
Grade 7 weaves both works around one line of inquiry.
Why isn't silent reading enough?
It builds no spoken fluency, timing or control.
How should you rehearse?
Out loud, from notes, with a timer, several times.
Should you rehearse the discussion?
Yes — have someone ask likely follow-up questions.
Why time every run?
To land near ten minutes with a conclusion.
What happens with each rehearsal run?
It gets tighter, smoother, and more fluent.
Notes or a memorised script for rehearsal?
Notes — a word-for-word script is flat and fragile.
Which criteria does rehearsal improve?
All four — structure (C), language (D), and confident analysis (A, B).
Why is the IO especially worth rehearsing?
It's the one assessment you can fully practise in advance.
The commonest weak preparation?
Reading notes silently instead of rehearsing aloud.
Rehearsing the IO in one line?
Aloud, from notes, to time, repeated — plus discussion practice.
The shape of a comparative thesis?
‘Both works do X; but whereas A does Y, B does Z.’
How many works does the thesis name?
Both — one claim about the pair.
Must it be arguable?
Yes — provable and disputable, not a fact or summary.
What must the thesis answer?
The actual general question's idea, not a topic you'd prefer.
Two theses or one?
One — not ‘Work A shows… Work B shows…’ separately.
What does the thesis set up?
Criterion B2 (comparison) and C (focus) from the first line.
A weak thesis looks like…
‘This essay is about power in both works’ — a topic, not an argument.
What proves the thesis?
Every body paragraph, each about both works.
Why include a difference in the thesis?
So the essay is a comparison, not a list of shared themes.
Connective often used in the thesis?
‘but whereas’ — to mark the key difference.
Plan by work or by point?
By point — each covers both works.
What does the grid look like?
Shared points as rows; Work A and Work B as columns.
What becomes one paragraph?
One row — a shared point across both works.
What does an empty cell mean?
That point isn't comparative — cut it or rethink it.
How many comparative points?
Usually 3–4, each proving part of the thesis.
What decides the points?
The comparative thesis.
The failure that by-point planning prevents?
Two mini-essays (a section on each work).
Which criteria does the plan protect?
B2 (comparison) and C (organisation).
What goes in each cell?
How that work treats the shared point.
First thing to write in the plan?
The comparative thesis.
What opens a comparative paragraph?
A comparative topic sentence naming both works and the shared point.
Weave or stack?
Weave — move between the works, ideally within sentences.
What is the ‘stacked’ mistake?
All of Work A, then all of Work B, with a ‘similarly’ bolted on.
How does the paragraph end?
By linking the comparison back to the thesis.
Which criterion is won here?
B2 — comparison and contrast.
What must you analyse in EACH work?
A technique and its effect (Criterion B1).
A connective for weaving?
‘whereas’, ‘similarly’, ‘by contrast’, ‘like’.
The comparative paragraph shape?
Comparative topic sentence → woven works → link to thesis.
How close together should the works appear?
Ideally within the same sentences — not in two blocks.
What does a comparative topic sentence contain?
Both works and the shared point (‘Both present X, but…’).
Why is ‘both use imagery’ weak?
True of almost every book — compare the effect, not the label.
Two ways to compare technique?
Same device / different effects; or different devices / same effect.
What must a technique comparison end on?
What the difference reveals about each work's meaning.
Which criteria does this serve?
B1 (authorial choices) and B2 (comparison).
Same device, opposite effect — example?
Light imagery for hope in one work, for threat in the other.
Different device, same effect — example?
One builds dread with short sentences, the other with a slow metaphor.
The commonest weak comparison?
Naming a shared device without comparing its effect.
What is the ‘common ground’?
The shared technique — the starting point, not the whole point.
Technique comparison in one line?
Technique → effect → meaning, in BOTH works, compared.
Does the device have to be identical to compare?
No — different devices reaching one effect is a rich comparison.
Theme vs argument?
Theme = the topic; argument = what the work says about it.
Why is ‘both are about love’ weak?
A shared topic with no argument — almost every work qualifies.
What do you compare?
Each work's argument/claim about the theme.
Where should each argument be rooted?
In specific textual moments and choices.
Best kind of thematic comparison?
Two works reaching different or opposed verdicts on the same theme.
Which criteria does this serve?
A (interpretation) and B2 (comparison).
A theme is a…
Topic (love, power, memory) — the starting point, not the whole point.
An argument is a…
Claim the work makes about the theme.
Common weak move?
Naming a shared theme without comparing the arguments.
Thematic comparison in one line?
‘A argues X about the theme; B argues Y’ — rooted in the text.
What are ‘big’ authorial choices?
Whole-work decisions: form, structure, perspective, genre.
Why compare big choices?
They show you read each work as a designed whole — high-level analysis.
What must you always add?
The effect — never just name the choice.
Example of a structural choice?
Chronological order vs beginning at the end and working backwards.
Example of a perspective choice?
First-person vs omniscient vs unreliable vs multiple voices.
Example of a form choice?
A tight sonnet vs a sprawling novel.
Which criterion does this serve?
B1 — analysis of authorial choices (and B2 to compare them).
‘Architecture, not bricks’ means?
Compare whole-work design, not only line-level devices.
A genre choice to compare?
How each work uses or bends its genre's conventions (tragedy, satire…).
Common missed opportunity?
Only comparing small devices, never the big structural choices.
What must a Paper 2 intro contain?
Both works (titles/authors), the question's idea, and a comparative thesis.
How should the conclusion differ from the intro?
It draws the comparison together and adds a ‘so what?’ — not a repeat.
What must neither end do?
Summarise the plots.
The intro's most important sentence?
The comparative thesis.
The conclusion's payoff?
What the comparison reveals about the works or the theme.
Which criterion does the frame support?
C — a focused comparative argument.
Should the conclusion add a new point?
No — draw existing points together instead.
How should you name the works?
By title and author, in the introduction.
Common weak conclusion?
Repeating the intro or summarising the plots.
The frame in one line?
Intro: both works + thesis. Conclusion: reworded thesis + draw together + so what.
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