Topic 3.7: Examiner feedback and common mistakes Questions

First, a quick look — common Paper 1 mistakes

Warm up first — common Paper 1 mistakes

Diagnose the mistakes. (Exam-style practice.)

Take it step by step — diagnosing and fixing common Paper 1 mistakes

Build a full analysis of the text below, one step at a time. Guiding question: How does the writer persuade readers to change their habits? Work through the parts — together they add up to a complete answer.

Write a guided analysis of the following text, consciously avoiding the big four mistakes (feature-spotting, summary, no focus, ignoring the reader). Guiding question: How does the writer persuade readers to change their habits? You may answer the guiding question or argue another focus, staying focused and supported.