Key Idea: In the HL essay, a quotation only counts as evidence when you analyse the choice inside it and link it to your argument.
Using evidence
- Embed short — Weave a few words into your own sentence.
- Analyse the choice — Name the technique and its effect: how and why.
- Link — Show how it proves your point.
| Weak | Why |
|---|---|
| 'This is shown when the writer says ...' | It quotes but never analyses |
| A long block quote | Too long; nothing is picked out |
Cut any quotation that does not move the argument on.
When does a quotation become evidence? Once you have analysed it and shown what it proves.
How long should quotations be? A few words, embedded.
What comes straight after every quote? Analysis: what the device is and what it does.
What do you do with a quote that does not help? Cut it.